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Picture Yashira Colón-Jiménez · Author · added over 2 years ago
I’m definitely tinkering with the draft even now, so I’ll keep in mind where I can add in more details. Thanks!
Ehlwdzk8 Alice Merriwood · Reader · added over 2 years ago
Really liking what I’m reading so far! I’m starting to ship Alvina and Baako, especially after the Chapter 2 teaser. My (very slight) problem is that the end of Alvina’s escape from the shuttle with baby felt like it could’ve been bigger, a little more dramatic given the aftermath with her falling into unconsciousness. But that’s just me...and that may change when I read it again later. But I really like it! #TeamAlvaako xD