This opening chapter paints and intriguing and mysterious world.

A mysterious world, packed with elegant and poetic prose that tells the tale of two characters wishing to be warriors. I wonder where their path will take them? Cannot wait to read more!

The prose and diction of this story are elegantly written. It flows like water over a stream matching the tone and world built by the author. The world-building itself is enough to grip a reader's attention. It has a sense of awe and wonder, the serene wrapped in the uncharted. Characters are intriguing and it is interesting to see the world through their eyes. My only suggestion is that there are a very redundancies that with a simple word change will work better. But my biggest complaint is there is not more for me to read! A wonderful work and I cannot wait to see where it goes.