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Fiza Hasan · Author · added over 5 years ago
I like the idea behind your story. But, I think how it all plays out is a little absurd. If they’re only five years, this is not how Elizabeth should be behaving nor should David understand any of it. And the way they react to their mother dying and Kathryn killing her also just seems off. Overall, great start!

Hey guys,

I have uploaded two new chapters and I have started taking pre-orders again. Please check out the chapters and let me know what you think and please share the story if you like it. 

Also, I just recently created a new draft called Interview With An Angel and it dives deeper into the mind of Sebastien who is one of the main characters in Finding The Princess. The story goes over his time in Heaven, his view of how things ended up in The Pit/Hell, and then all of his fun times on Earth. Please check it out if that sounds interesting to you!

Thanks!

Hey guys,

I have started updating the project with new chapters. I am almost done with the first draft of this new book and I will post more chapters later. Check out the new first chapter and let me know what you think.

Thank you!

Hey guys, 

I haven’t updated in a while so here I am. I have been going through and planning out the chapters and scenes for this book so that I can try to make it longer during Camp NaNoWriMo but I realized that for the first book it moves a little quickly through the story of the sisters. So, instead of making this book longer I am writing a completely new book to be the first book of the series and it will now be four books instead of three. I probably won’t be uploading any of the new chapters here but if you would like to read any of the chapters from the new book during April you can follow the progress on my blog. I have a few short stories written right now and I have some of the old chapters posted so please check it out and let me know what you think.

Thank you!

Hey guys,

I just wanted to let you know again that I have started the draft for the second book, The Awakening. Please check it out and let me know what you think of the first chapter. I will add a new chapter to that soon.

Also, I have put up the first few chapters of Finding the Princess up on Wattpad to get some feedback. Please go and check it out, I will be updating it soon but I will not be adding any more chapters here. 

Thank you!

Hey guys,

I have the first chapter of The Awakening up now. I think I have uploaded all of the chapters of this book that I want to for right now. If you guys could leave comments and let me know what you think that would be very helpful. I know that parts of it probably really need to be rewritten so just let me know what you like and what you don’t. 

I also have the Interview With An Angel idea up and I’m thinking about turning it into a draft soon but I want to get a few more followers first. It is the deeper life story of Sebastien, the main angel from this story. It digs deeper into why he left Heaven in the first place, how he ended up in Hell and what he did there, and why he now lives on Earth. If that interests you please check it out and if you know anyone else that it might interest please share it.

Thank you!

Hey guys,

I feel like I haven't updated in a while. I know I haven't put up a new chapter in a while. I added three short chapters today. I added up until the last character really gets introduced into the story. You will have already met him if you read the chapter that I didn't send out. I did send out a chapter that gives you a little glimpse into everyone's powers and showing a bit of what they can do. You should know all of the characters now.

I also changed the title as you can probably already tell. Although it should probably be called Protecting the Princess instead of Finding because the finding part was really easy and happens in like the first three chapters but I'm working on it. I'm also working on making a better blurb and full synopsis of the story since it is not the same as the first draft I wrote of this story.

The draft is completed as of right now so what you are reading are the only chapters I have right now, and I know that they probably need a lot of work but I can't always see my own mistakes. Please leave some comments on the chapters and tell me what you like, what needs more, and what is just unnecessary for the story.

Thank you!

Hey guys, 

I just wanted to make a quick update. I'm feeling a bit better so I'm hoping that means that I can get some more chapters written. I just wanted to let you guys know that I added three chapters today. The first is Mr. Cross's realization of who Ivy really is, the second introduces yet another character that is rather strange, and the third one talks about what they will do with Ivy once she returns and introduces the rest of the characters that are described as 'the boy' in the earlier chapters, there's also a little glimpse at the relationship between the two angels that I told you guys about earlier. I didn't send that one out because I don't know how I feel about it yet but if you guys do want to read it it's there. If you do read it please let me know what you think because I'm not very good with writing that kind of stuff.

Thank you!

Hey guys,

I don't know if any of you guys have been reading my chapters or not, it doesn't really matter to me as long as I can get them out there. I know everyone has busy schedules and doesn't always have that time to take. This update might sound a bit dark but I'm in a bit of a depression right now and usually that takes a toll on how I feel about my work but I will try to be happy about it as possible because good things are happening as far as my writing is going.

As far as this first book is concerned the draft is done and I'm setting it off to the side now and beginning on the second book which is already the length of the first book and I'm not even half way through it which shows that I got much more comfortable in the world that I'm setting in. It has taken me three days to write the first 6 chapters of the second book and I'm hoping that with my completely empty schedule tomorrow I can sit and just crank out a few more chapters or maybe finish the whole book.

I will post a new chapter tonight so look for that and please follow the drafts for the next two books, The Awakening and The Final Battle, as soon as I have most of the chapters up for the first book I will start updating those drafts as well.

Please share the story to your friends and family. I have been sharing my covers and small excerpts but nothing seems to be getting anyone's attention so I just thought I would ask you guys for a little help getting the word out.

Thank you!

Hey guys,

I know I've been making updates a lot lately but that won't be happening as much from now on because I have a very heavy course load this semester with six classes every Tuesday and Thursday. That won't hinder my writing because I hand write all of my chapters but I won't be posting as much, I will try to post at least two chapters a week and then an update every weekend if I can remember to.

I will be adding the next two parts of the series as drafts soon so if you like this book and would like to finish out the Lost Princess series please look for those. I have decided to focus all of my time on this series and making it as good as it can be. 

Thank you!