I’ve never actually read a collection of poems outside of school. Your poems are interesting--definitely a form of writing I’m unfamiliar with, and I’d love to see more.

I was working on editing my book, and then suddenly my Inkshares page reloaded and it took me to the forums and I clicked on the first topic. Then next thing you know, I read your comment and decided to check out your book. I read some of your poems right now, and I think it’s a great start. My only concern is, some of them seem to be lacking a main topic, which means it doesn’t feel like the sentences flow to make a complete poem. Other than that, I think you’re doing a great job!