Discussion Sign in to Comment Fiza Hasan · Author · added 9 months ago I’m excited to read on. Also, thank you for your support for my book! Sue Castle · Author · added 9 months ago Thanks for your kind comments, David and Fiza. Now I feel encouraged to post more chapters. Fiza Hasan · Author · added 9 months ago I am mind blown with this beginning! I want to read more and know what happens! Can’t wait to find out who is the victim! Again I have to say, this was some way to start off a story! David McGlone · Author · added 9 months ago Sue, I like the start. Good description and great atmosphere, it draws you in and then, as the body impacts...what? why?...more!Excellent beginning.