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Fiza Hasan · Author · added over 5 years ago
   I’m excited to read on. Also, thank you for your support for my book!
Sue Castle · Author · added over 5 years ago
Thanks for your kind comments, David and Fiza. Now I feel encouraged to post more chapters.
Fiza Hasan · Author · added over 5 years ago
I am mind blown with this beginning! I want to read more and know what happens! Can’t wait to find out who is the victim! Again I have to say, this was some way to start off a story!
David McGlone · Author · added over 5 years ago
Sue, I like the start. Good description and great atmosphere, it draws you in and then, as the body impacts...what? why?...more!
Excellent beginning.