I think you’ve got an interesting start.

I’m working on the world that this book will take place in so I’m writing fake emails and memos from people that may never actually appear in the book. Not sure if I should share any of those as they are just the background that takes place about 15 years before the actual story... any thoughts on that?

This book will be more about the culture and relationships between the altered and unaltered humans and not so much about the science.