That’s the way to go -- revise, put it away, revise again. I took my book through the grinder twice with an excellent freelance editor (after several beta readers) before looking to publish it.
Hi Leo. Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. To answer your question: I do plan on adding more chapters in the near future. I have a full manuscript, but I wrote it a long time ago. I want to expand and edit it heavily before posting anything new.
Hi, Andy. Interesting read and vivid voice. Interested to know more about this character to understand his colourful view of things. Will this continue with additional chapters?