Jul 13, 2016

Hi, Everyone!

So, I just put up Chapter 7, and I have to say that it’s quite possibly my LEAST favorite chapter in the entire book (I know. Great marketing there, huh? Don’t you just want to read it now??) But seriously, I hate it. I’ve always hated it. Every time I change it I still hate it. I think it’s too long and too dry (even though it’s so much shorter and better than it was before the first 8 rewrites). The problem is that I can’t just delete it because the events within are necessary to the story. You can’t have chapter 8 without chapter 7, and chapter 8 is where you meet *SPOILER* Kaiya’s croeli brother! *END SPOILER* 

Gah. I love the chapters going forward and will probably start posting them in the next couple days, but I could really REALLY use some help on how to make 7 less... sucky. Please. And thank you!

Love always,

T