Aug 7, 2016

Hello all. 

First of many updates - I’ve amended my submission to include the whole of Chapter One rather than the small excerpt previously uploaded. This follows a bit of a re-jig of the book order, which previously contained a rather weighty eight chapters (including prologue) coming in at about 60 pages (10,000 words) each - it feels much better balanced in its new format at about twice as many chapters of half that length per chapter. This also means I can upload the chapters in full to give you a better feel for the story, rather than pulling out random sections and leaving blanks in between each.

Please do have a read, and I’d love to hear any feedback. Bear in mind one of Inkshares’ snazzier little foibles - you can highlight passages you particularly like and comment on them. I would love to hear from you if there’s parts you found enjoyable.