Sep 8, 2016
Sent out an edited and update first chapter. Hope you all enjoy.
Looks like I gained a fourth reader when I wasn’t looking. Thanks for checking out Nightvision. Let me know what you think of the edits or if I missed any drastic mistakes. The problem with doing half my edits on my phone, it does weird stuff sometimes or I miss something. It’s strange how changing the reading format makes it easier to spot stuff. I’ve already made some small changes just from skimming though the chapter here on Inkshares right after I posted it. lol If I’m not careful it will become the never-ending edits. I think I’ve learned that lesson though and will keep plowing forwards, not backwards.
In other writing related news... My writing team The Wolves just won another challenge in the Writer’s Games. Yay! That one took true teamwork to pull off.