Update for Henderson House

Jan 13, 2021

Hello Henderson House supporters!

I am currently working on revising Chapter One. As you all know, the first two to three pages are critical for pulling a reader into my story and painting a picture of my main character’s status quo.

I’ve been getting great feedback from my beta readers and I thought you all might enjoy reading 2 versions of Chapter One and then getting a Discussion started on my Inkshares page about which opening you like better and why, plus any other ideas you might have for the first few pages of the book.

Thanks for playing along! This is the fun part - working to go from good to great.

Best,

Caren

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