I love that you’ve set this in Toronto, ON. There are so many mentions of places and companies that I recognize and immediately evoke childhood memories of living and growing up in Toronto myself. I really enjoyed the cadence of your writing and the dialogue was spot on. I can’t wait to read more!! I particularly lost myself in the friction and dynamics between Ida and Harry. They will, no doubt, prove to be quite interesting in the upcoming chapters and further development of your story!