This writing interests me. I have only skimmed it and I want to join a conversation when I have time to read it properly.  But there is none so I’m starting one.  Also I’m totally new to this site.   I’ll go and explore more and come back. 

I’m interested in reading more.  The explanations of the structure and operation of the space station were credible and thought provoking.  The descriptions around tense action scenes held my attention.  There were several hooks to tempt future reading, for example the lawyer from Earth and characters we met only fleetingly.  I agree with another reviewer about the need for a good editor but I see real potential.