Unfortunately I cannot post a true review on the right hand side as I refuse to buy this book after chapter 1. It is pure trash. The storyline is incomplete, lacks motive and the writing is absolute drivel. Young Adults to me is 16-21 and trust me, I would definitely not partake in reading this.
It sounds like you’re telling the story around a camp fire with no proof reading or any change to the text, literally saying greenbloodian is a language...oo good one! That’ll go down in history for sentence of the century.
It’s incredibly dark for your target audience, his mum vomiting 24/7 and you eat about 10 sandwiches...not to mention you mention your own name several times and even rhyme it with dizzy. Just preposterous. It’s genuinely disappointing that something like this can get out there in the writing world when people like Tolkien and (inside altered joke) Shakespeare have developed master pieces...
Pure. To the bone. Trash. I wouldn’t even give this to charity for free because it’s basically torture.
It’s incredibly dark for your target audience, his mum vomiting 24/7 and you eat about 10 sandwiches...not to mention you mention your own name several times and even rhyme it with dizzy. Just preposterous. It’s genuinely disappointing that something like this can get out there in the writing world when people like Tolkien and (inside altered joke) Shakespeare have developed master pieces...
Pure. To the bone. Trash. I wouldn’t even give this to charity for free because it’s basically torture.