I really enjoyed these first two chapters. It’s almost like you reached into the dreams that end with asking ourselves, "What the heck was that about?" and then trying and failing to go back to sleep to find out! I can’t recall what the original context was for the suggestion to ’always leave them wanting more’, but you succeeded in that! The one thing that I wondered about was in chapter two, did you mean his hair was revolting or did you mean reverting? Curious because mine has experienced both...and worse.
An eccentric modern-day mad scientist with a grand plan of developing a preservative to halt the natural decomposition of his bizarre sandwich collection, and the boy who unwittingly gets pulled into it as his assistant.
The one thing that I wondered about was in chapter two, did you mean his hair was revolting or did you mean reverting? Curious because mine has experienced both...and worse.