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When Sofi Cagninej heads to Italy to restore the family wine cellar, murderous feuds threaten her life and identity.
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Chapter One: Too Much Trouble for Wine

        I decelerated when I reached the bumpy road that led from the quaint town of Borgofranco d’Ivrea to the rows of balmetti that hugged the foot of the nearby mountains. Unfortunately my parents had pawned their party house off on me. “I’m not Italian,” I’d protested, waving my arms in the air. “I’m Italian-American!” They’d given me funds to make necessary “minor” repairs. Thus I’d lef. . .

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    Chapter One: Too Much Trouble for Wine

            I decelerated when I reached the bumpy road that led from the quaint town of Borgofranco d’Ivrea to the rows of balmetti that hugged the foot of the nearby mountains. Unfortunately my parents had pawned their party house off on me. “I’m not Italian,” I’d protested, waving my arms in the air. “I’m Italian-American!” They’d given me funds to make necessary “minor” repairs. Thus I’d lef. . .

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      Luisa commented on Bad Italian Wine
      So you are not a total outsider. Also explain why an Italian American get out into the world alive without learning the basics of spaghetti sauce and seasonings? I’m not Italina and I’ve learned to make a decent sauce from scratch even though Paul Newman’s sauces can save a gal from doom at  a dinner party.
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        Luisa commented on Bad Italian Wine
        Place space between balmetti and that.

        Again why not feel as if you belong. Does the main character not know of her ancestral beginnings?  Hmm  the characters parents are woeful in their ability to prepare the main character for life in the glorious country of Italia!


        The character whose name you have failed to give your readers is woefully uneducated about the importance of Italian wine in the Global economy.
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          When Sofi Cagninej heads to Italy to restore the family wine cellar, murderous feuds threaten her life and identity.