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Alina Vega commented on an excerpt of Miners
I really like your concept! I'd just say be aware of how you mix your objective narrative voice with informal opinions. Your narrator can absolutely be less-than-objective and have a more informal tone, but it would be more appropriate if it was an overarching theme instead of at choice moments. Nice work though! I'll keep an eye on this one.
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