Before the age of reason and science, magic ruled the world. Now, it’s coming back and if most of humanity gets wiped out in the process....well, sometimes you have to break a few eggs.
Asteroids, war, mutiny, politics all threaten the behemoth space ship designed to eliminate asteroids and comets. Nations squabble, send spies aboard the ship, sabotage diplomatic meetings and the various workings of the ship.
The world is dark and broken after the god-king’s ambition nearly destroyed it. Jak Fuller is an orphan whose love of stories has led him to wander in search of legends. Soon it leads him to the allure of dark magic...
Maybe a shortened sentence would work better here. Like this: However, there has been no sign of it since. Though the storm that had harried their every move from the day they departed Crimond, has made the search extremely difficult. Replacing 'had' with 'has' would also make the sentence sound more active, like it is still happening...
Maybe a shortened sentence would work better here. Like this: However, there has been no sign of it since. Though the storm that had harried their every move from the day they departed Crimond, has made the search extremely difficult. Replacing 'had' with 'has' would also make the sentence sound more active, like it is still happening...