I’m wondering how people feel about making comments on books in funding mode?  Should they only be positive or is it OK to leave constructive criticism?  Seeing as how these books are in FUNDING mode it almost seems counter ethical to make criticisms when these books are trying to make presales...  I’d like to know what other people think.

The pov character first feels hate for Bobby but then feels sorry for him? Then later reconsiders perhaps killing them all was best. Feels a bit schizophrenic really makes it difficult to get a grasp on this character if they are going back and forth so quickly between such strong emotions.  Maybe first feeling sorry and then considering killing (without any hating) is a more even way of progressing these emotions.