Robert Trusardi recommended Raven and Bone
Immersive and darkly enveloped story. Excellent for fans of gothic supernatural stories especially for fans of authors like Anne Rice.
Raven and Bone
Ava Aurildis is a witch with anxiety, a lot of anger and a past so dark it’s kept her running for centuries. To save her family she’ll have to confront her demons before time, or something worse, catches up with her.
Robert Trusardi commented on an excerpt of Raven and Bone

The pov character first feels hate for Bobby but then feels sorry for him? Then later reconsiders perhaps killing them all was best. Feels a bit schizophrenic really makes it difficult to get a grasp on this character if they are going back and forth so quickly between such strong emotions.  Maybe first feeling sorry and then considering killing (without any hating) is a more even way of progressing these emotions.

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