Chapter 6 is up. If you're liking ATLANTIS FALLING, could I trouble you to pre-order a copy? The manuscript is complete, so if I make the goal, you will definitely get the book. Surely you have some Inkshares credits kicking around. :)
I'd start with this paragraph, or this image -- the legendary return of a city from realms beyond. That's more interesting than a guy crouching n rocks. Add Rahz in the next paragraph.
Sacral, Rahz’s former home, would be making its return to the world, just as his master had predicted. The city, stolen by a betrayer, a former friend; who tore the city out of the world to somewhere other, even as she ascended to godhood on a wave of stolen power.
Life twisting magic, demonic possession and immortals who have outlived many of the gods themselves come together in this epic fantasy inspired by the likes of Glen Cook and Steven Erikson.
