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My wonderful readers! I have good news and I have bad news. I’ll start with the bad! Because that is just how I do things. I may have accidentally downloaded a file over the prologue, undid it, did it again and then undid it a second time. As a result, I lost some comments and several pieces of constructive criticism. Please feel free to tear into it again. Or you can always message me, tweet at me, send me a carrier pigeon...whatever is easiest. Don’t fret too badly though, I am a glutton for punishment and have locked most of your suggestions in the box I call my mind-brain. 

I also am uploading this a bit later than anticipated. Life has been a particularly harsh mistress to me this week, and I was in a frenzy. As a result, my Wednesday deadline fell by the wayside. My sincerest apologies.

TO THE GOOD NEWS! Chapter 1 is now officially UP! And there was much rejoicing. You’ll notice it is very different in a lot of ways, but I promise that it does build the overarching story. I hope you like it. 

Also I am looking for beta-readers! If you’re interested in reading about a chapter a week, then this might be the gig for you. The book is still in it’s toddler stages, and like any good book will probably go through some rewrites. So if you wanna be one of the lucky folks who dictate what I may rewrite, shoot me a message. I’m usually quite friendly between the hours of 8 to 1 am. Eastern time.

Now I must slumber. The bell tolls in about five hours for me to wake up and go to my regular job. Many exciting things in the pipeline, so stay tuned!

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    Yeah...Looking at it now, it could probably use a revision.
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