Fantastic character development from chapter 1. Already I'm concerned about the mundane aspects of their lives and I know the moment a supernatural twist is thrown it's going to impact the reader even more. Keep up the great work!
I’d trade reviews with you!
I’ll gladly trade reviews with each and everyone in this thread. I’ll do some today :)
YOU GET A REVIEW! YOU GET A REVIEW! EVERYONE HERE GETS A REVIEW! lol Just couldn’t help myself!
I’ll follow suit! I should be able to get around to all of these this afternoon!
I’m also up for trading reviews with everyone here. It certainly does sound like fun. I’ll probably get around to doing some today. ^.^
I feel like Frost needs more reviews, and I’m willing to trade conscientious, constructive reviews with other authors.
@Angela Melamud Solving this would help make the site more reader-friendly!