My hand reached out in the picture, as if reaching for something, grasping for something that wasn't there. It looked amazing in the picture, but was really me almost falling from the weight of the man on my shoulders
Seems a little silly... I'm guessing this is you saying she usually wears it down, but I'm struck with a 'well duh', because where else would it lay? Probably is just me being picky.
my straight hair rested on my back
I cannot tell if this is a slight hint to arrogance, a real statistic, or just you informing me that she is really popular. Also, the 'known' feels lonely. It's like you meant 'ever known' but forgot the ever, or 'currently known' perhaps.
most popular female ghost hunter known
I've noticed that you have a problem I do, which is occasionally you switch tenses. If it's written past tense, like most books, this should be 'that rested by his side'.
I lost the realness of the paranormal to the fashion of television
I assume this book is set during modern times, so I'm not really sure what this means by 'altered'. It brings to mind futuristic connotations, like genetic engineering, or maybe plastic surgery? Might just be me, but it brings me out of the story as I wonder about it.