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on, not onto

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Another great sentence.

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If that doesn't foreshadow what his apartment looked like, then I have been doing a terrible job describing the place.

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change the brackets.

tried -and succeeded- to find

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tried(and succeeded) to

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Make this a question and you'll sell it.

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(the frontal lobe)

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Jodhan Ford commented on an excerpt of The Remains Of Civilization

This is to much of a jump... incredulity should come first, then acceptance. He is after all taking this call from a dead sleep. Maybe he should be checking the caller ID wondering if this a prank call...

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