M.D. Pardy commented on The Travels of Thomas Humbolt
I’m new, so I kind of just started putting up an opening chapter. I’ve been rethinking this as it really doesn’t do much other than introduce the main character. My current thought is to drop a few middle chapters in and let anyone reading see some meat and potatos.
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