Great use of parallelism for dramatic effect! I feel like it should be a "goddamn" heart attack, though :).
The Captain makes it clear to me that it’s my goddamn fault some goddamn citizen walked up to our goddamn ambulance and had a heart attack without having the common goddamn decency to call 911 first.
It seems like you’re copping out of describing the sound, which I think would be worth attempting anyways following these lines, even if it’s with non-words like "zeeeeeeeewp" etc.
If you’ve never heard that sound before it’s kind of hard to explain. If you have heard it it’s not something you’re likely to forget.
I think this guy just died on me.
Forced to shave his beard. He misses it dearly.
