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"climbing"

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claiming

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"woman" might sound better here.

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lady

G. A. Finocchiaro commented on an excerpt of The Hunter Saga

Remove this. I think the sentence is more solid without it.

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for whatever reason

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get

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I’m guessing this needs to be on two separate lines.

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”Are you ready?” the oracle asked. ”Do it,” the seer answered.