Paul says, "Stephen, as always, the dynamic between Scott and Jeff is spot-on. The story flows nicely when they interact. I was, however, hoping for more from the initial flight scene. There were no details, externally or internally within Scott, to give it the necessary magic. Go nuts with that scene and really bring it to life!"
Paul asks, "Is he just gliding or actually flying? If flying, how?" He’s gliding. I mentioned it in a previous chapter. Is there something I can add to this description to restate it?
