Hi Jennifer. Read chapter one and was intrigued, so I have pre-ordered. I hope you don't mind me saying, I think the tone and characters are great, but there's a couple of small things with the language I think you could change to make it flow a bit better. Also one tiny bit where the viewpoint character seems to shift. But the plot is drawing me on, and the world seems very interesting. (Also, I don't want to just wade in and start making complaints - just my opinion :-). ) Looking forward to reading more. Best, Jamie.
Supplanters are nearly impossible for mortal men to kill, making war against them difficult. Their goal is to destroy your soul and take control of your body. This is Aaron and Tace’s reality, and it’s about to be ours.
Hi Jennifer. Read chapter one and was intrigued, so I have pre-ordered. I hope you don't mind me saying, I think the tone and characters are great, but there's a couple of small things with the language I think you could change to make it flow a bit better. Also one tiny bit where the viewpoint character seems to shift. But the plot is drawing me on, and the world seems very interesting. (Also, I don't want to just wade in and start making complaints - just my opinion :-). ) Looking forward to reading more. Best, Jamie.