Actually, this looks so good that I have pre-ordered again for another 3 copies.  This really needs to get published.  I will continue to recommend it!

I don't want to make criticisms, because I am really intrigued by what I have read and have pre-ordered a copy...but I notice here this sentence uses the word 'hand' three times.  Room to improve it? Ah, now I feel like a dick! I really do like this story and hope it reaches the funding goal!  Just trying to help :-)