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I would retire happily knowing that I put my all in to it
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I like this. You used another character to point out that she was making a face without TELLING me she was. Though his description of it leaves me wondering what face it was since he doesn't say. A face of resignation? Disbelief?
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     “Get that look off your face, Blair,” I heard Jake say as I eyed him,while opening the door.
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    Logic says no? Why in the world would logic say no? Statistically, sure,. but if logically it's not expected to be haunted then why in the world did they come in the first place? 
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      logic says no
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      It took me a moment to realize there was a car and a van separately. Also, this sentence is awkward. The 'no equipment in it' part in particular.
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        who was driving the car with me and no equipment in it
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        For a professional that has seen a lot of fakes and presumably some real deals, she gets the creeps easily. I feel like she's dismissing her gut instinct/first reaction, which for the paranormal is never a good thing. Unless she gets the shivers even at convincing looking fakes too, but then I wonder about her instincts.
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          a shiver rolling down my spine.
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