Andrew Martin commented on an excerpt of The Cora Chronicles: Genesis
if it sounds like it, just say it does. don’t "wishy washy" it by saying "could resemble".  
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    It made a whirring, screeching noise that could resemble a growl.
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    Andrew Martin commented on an excerpt of The Cora Chronicles: Genesis
    "the young Female" should just be "she regretted it", or "regretting shouting at the creature as it turned" or whatever. It’s best to either use the character’s name, or use she/he, otherwise you risk the reader becoming confused.
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      the young female began feeling regret
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      Andrew Martin commented on an excerpt of The Cora Chronicles: Genesis
      Don’t need to say "horror", as the fact that she screamed alone should convey the sense of terror she feels.

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        Cora screamed in horror
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