Aging has been cured. The rich live forever, and the poor are forgotten. Then the Golem comes, and everything changes. A dark science fiction novel for fans of China Mieville, Neil Gaiman, and whoever your favourite author is (probably).
A world where magic is the stuff of fairytales and science and technology are gospel truth, the people of Magnami find themselves needing the return of the 13 Knights of Thaelion. It begins with the quest of young Perilea into a place time forgot.
I love this immediate reversal, but I would double check to make sure you want this many semicolons. They are used correctly, but so many so fast call attention to themselves and I wonder if you could get the same cadence with periods.
