Good, point, thank you for the critique. I’m definitely taking notes for edits and such.
Another oddity to file away for later examination along with the sensory issues.
Kieran stood gazing at his sister for several silent minutes. As he watched another petal shivered and fell from the bud to land beside its brethren. An answering ripple of pain echoed through Kieran as the petal landed on the cold marble.
The spell slowly began to take effect, condensing into a swirling multi-colored mist that danced around the rose melding with its own silvery aura.
A lover of space, the paranormal and spectacular movie dialogue.
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