So you’ve inadvertently trapped an ancient trans-dimensional god in your backyard shed; what do you do? That’s what Venus McKenzy and her friends would like to know.
This is the proper way to write psych assessment: without the "e". Why are Officer Brisket and his acolyte left for dead? Weren't they just knocked unconscious? "It's a very long story and I have no time to explain" seems like weird thing to say for someone about to jump into a mystical portal. Why is James talking to the unconscious officer as he steps into the portal?
You may have something there but it'll need some more work.
This is the proper way to write psych assessment: without the "e". Why are Officer Brisket and his acolyte left for dead? Weren't they just knocked unconscious? "It's a very long story and I have no time to explain" seems like weird thing to say for someone about to jump into a mystical portal. Why is James talking to the unconscious officer as he steps into the portal?