Mike Esty sent an update for Origin

Hello, all.

Been stuck in a rut the past couple (quite a few) months. Having a full time job in a kitchen is rather draining of energy and motivation.

I am going to try to get back into writing more every day. Again I have a full rough draft written down and am working on the second draft. 

I updated Chapter 3 in the preview of this book which you can read on my page. It adds a bit more detail and more of Martin’s reasoning for doing what he does. His motives and justifications are integral to the feel of the book because it will allow you the reader more insight into the mind of a smart individual living in this city state. I was also, for some reason, trying to hold back information on his very unique ocular implant which will now be out front and described when he uses it. Who he got it from and why will still be kept under wraps and I hope it will be information that is yearned for as more backstory to this main character who is already hacking through the thick underbrush of life when you first meet him.

Uh, so I hope to get more motivation and continue plugging away at this story (one complication being that I was not sure how much detail I wanted to give because I want the plot to progress instead of being bogged down by describing everything).

So come on over and either re-read chapter 3 or read everything for the first time. Any and all feedback is appreciated.

Mike
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