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J. S. Chlapowski sent an update for A Light in the Void

Your support has been fantastic these last two weeks, guys.  We just hit 79 preorders and 70 individual readers!  This is incredible, and puts us well on our way to reaching the 250 preorder milestone we need to get A Light in the Void published.

You may have noticed the book cover has changed from a photo I took in Spain to a more stylized cover with a cat touching the universe.  The artist is a good friend from Korea.  Check out his instagram at www.instagram.com/thedrinkybear.  He’s incredibly talented, and very much open to commissions if you would like him to design your own book cover.  

The goal this week is to reach 100 preorders sold and/or at least 87 individual readers. Once we reach either goal, I will release another excerpt from the book.  This next excerpt will get more into the meat and the mysteries of the novel.  Please reach out to friends into sci-fi, fantasy, magical realism, or even if they’re just interested in reading about things bigger than themselves.

As a thank you for all your support, here’s a sneak peak of the next excerpt: 

The gas station had an empty feel. It hadn’t had any visitors for a long time, long enough for the loneliness to sink into the rusty hoses of the gas tanks and the mottled gray stone that hadn’t been paved in years. Under a yellow sign with faded, chipped numbers stood a small shack, yellowed spotted windows hiding whatever lay inside. The numbers on the sign advertised gas at three dollars a gallon, which was current as far as Bryce knew. He didn’t drive and Bryce didn’t own a car, so he didn’t really have any reason to know what the price of gas should be. It felt old and unused, like it had accepted that its use was done and that it may not be used again. It was a strange place to meet.

Thanks so much for all your support!  You all are amazing!

--Jarrod

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    J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Burned
    Lots of small paragraphs.  This definitely could be cleaned up a bit.  I’d also cut down on the adverbs.
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      I dumbly nodded my head, to which he responded, "Go ahead and speak, I won’t hurt you bud""Uh yes sir, we was headin west, somewhere ’round a rail town, just before the Rockies. We’re almost there""We’ll get moving in the morning, you better get rid of Saul’s corpse before the army finds it"
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      J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Burned
      I would use ’hiss’.

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        harshly whispered 
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        J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Burned
        I’m generally not a fan of over-representing accents in writing.  The apostrophes throw me out of the story, and it also throws off my reading voice.  It’s hard to do well.  
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          You try runnin’ off with the map, and you think I ain’t gon’ kill you? Asshole like you deserves to die thirty times for that! We was like brothers Saul!
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          J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Adventures of MONOMAN
          I know it’s tempting to have standalone sentences for dramatic effect, but it comes across as ’the author is doing this for dramatic effect.’  It throws the reader out of the story.  It’s better to just attach it to the previous paragraph. The reader will pick up on the import of the sentence on her own, so long as you set it up well, which you do in this case.
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