Rich Hsu commented on Champions of the Third Planet
My daughter read the Chapters you posted. Here is her review:
I really like this book so far. The story, setting and characters are quite interesting.  Also, the author, Mr. Leone, uses alot of humorous figurative language,which I really enjoy. I just finished reading Chapter Three, and I’m surprised that Milo is so scared of the bullies that he doesn’t think twice before going into the orb that is in the forest to hide until he finds out that he doesn’t know how get out...but then the orb lets him out. Why?  I can’t help but to be curious... about what is gonna happen next. I really want to read more! Please finish writing the book ASAP!!! = Danika age 10
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    jesse w siglow jr liked an update for Champions of the Third Planet

    Hello Champions!

    I don’t know about you guys but I had a cool day yesterday: I got to read the first chapter of Champions of the Third Planet to the fourth and fifth graders at Mid-City’s Prescott School of Enriched Sciences here in Los Angeles. 

    It’s been a looooong time since I was in elementary school but the students and teachers and Principal Panes were very welcoming and highly enthusiastic. I also got to leave before anybody gave out homework. 

    This was the first time I’ve read any of the book to anybody and I thought the reaction was FANTASTIC -- I hope the kids agree. The room got really quiet when I started to read about Milo and the Orb, the kids seemed to spark to the idea and asked me a lot of great questions afterward -- I really, really enjoyed it. Hopefully I can return when the book is on the shelves... 

     --Chris

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      Suffolkfred liked an update for Champions of the Third Planet

      Another review from a real kid!

      I love this book! Milo made me think to myself -"What would I do in his situation?"- I loved the character descriptions, and the orb’s effect on not only the main characters, but the settting and animals themeselves. Keep writing, I would love to read MORE! -----Payton 11 yrs. old

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