When Saran’s magic is stolen, she must confront a life without the ability to manipulate time, struggle to see a rebellion finished, and keep Keleir from falling ever closer to becoming The Living God.
@A.C. Weston I find myself skipping over what a character looks like if I can’t fit it in naturally. You never want to fall prey to the "character looking into a mirror and describing themselves" trap. Sometimes I write in too much description and then delete it out before I move on. I have a good idea in my head what someone looks like, but it’s hardly ever relevant to the scene so I leave it out.
GOOD LUCK