Amanda Orneck commented on an excerpt of Shaping Fate

How sad that they think God did this.

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Heartwrenching.

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The lifeless gray of Catherine’s body seemed to bleed throughout their home, coating it in grim stillness.

Amanda Orneck commented on an excerpt of Shaping Fate

I like this image, but it seems to be a fragment. Unless that's intentional, in which case totally ignore me.

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The mingling scents of sweet butterbur and pungent ginger

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How is he seeing these if

he's flying through the air?

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The scenes that played before him seemed familiar.

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Incredibly intriguing. This seems unique: the passage of his body physically across space while also passing through time. Fascinating.

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Ooh I can feel this sentence!

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The chill of the early spring night slithered inside and sent a shiver through him.