Antimony Noon commented on an excerpt of Acolyte of the Everstream
I love the phrasing, though I think "And" should be "An"?
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    And arrow had found a home deep in her shoulder
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    This might be stronger if included in the sentence before when the arrow initially hits. 
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      The arrow could be seen protruding out from both sides of his forearm.
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        I find myself a bit jealous of Antimony's descriptive ability.  The story, so far, is eloquently written and does a superb job of forming a detailed picture in my mind.  I anxiously await what happens next.
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          I find myself a bit jealous of Antimony's descriptive ability.  The story, so far, is eloquently written and does a superb job of forming a detailed picture in my mind.  I anxiously await what happens next.
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            @Antimony Noon Goodness!  I really like the way you describe everything.  Teaser chapters definitely did their duty in grabbing my attention and interest!
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