This is a lovely reveal that promises a very interesting story.
This is what happened to her” he replied distantly.
This sentence could be clearer? It’s possible to work out but I did find I skipped back to make sure.
The barkeep knew his way around the establishment very well, and upon fear of death would lead the gangly outsider dressed in blue to a man who had given him explicit instructions to turn away such a fellow.
Just because of the sentence structure, it might make more sense to have "him" be "the man"/"the outsider" here; otherwise it’s not immediately clear if "him" is Arlas or the man.
Though something about him
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