William Schiele commented on an excerpt of Disintegration
What is the view?  What does he see? You have a talent for creating visual images with words it would add to the story to use that skill here.
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    William Schiele commented on an excerpt of Disintegration
    Kind of an old term, you can come up with better like maybe; "baking in the Venusian sun."  Something relevant to their world.  
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      wringing our hands.”
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      Sync City is a compelling first person narrative with a guy whose both tough and thoughtful. I'm loving the story.
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      In a post-apocalyptic future, fractured timelines are wreaking havoc on the world. Only a tough, hard-drinking enforcer named Jack Trevayne can hold things together. This is gritty, hard-boiled sci-fi with attitude. The future is complicated. Jack is not.
      William Schiele commented on an excerpt of Sync City
      Here's the inciting incident. Now the story really gets going as these two characters will propel the rest of the narrative... just guessing, but I think it's awesome.
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        Peter I like how the big questions in life get answered by the most basic instincts.  This story is very good and I look forward to reading the rest.  Well done sir.
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          "I get to ride that and blow shit up,"
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          Shit, this is my real mission. Mikey’s slated to be one of us. Mikey’s going to be a Keeper. Assuming I can keep her alive.
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