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Just uploaded chapter three with a runthrough edit, it's still not perfect but the story is there! Enjoy and let me know what you guys think!

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    Humanity is gone but for one city, kept safe from the toxic outside world. Oxygen is scarce after curfew. You don’t want to be stuck outside after dark.
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    The buildings were brittle and hard-edged, unlike their smoother, less bulky cousins in the main city. Ferrin couldn’t even fathom names with which to describe and qualify the architecture he was seeing, the designs were outside of his modernized vocabulary. They we’re ugly by his own personal standards, the gloom of disuse only adding to their lack of appeal. The soaring wall of the dome looked worn and tired behind the sea of green-grey.

         “This place is ugly.” Weasel said, her voic. . .

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      Chapter one of Part One is up! It's about a 20 minute read so good with the morning cup of Joe. Rewrote the prologue as well and then accidentally deleted it, got confused and now it's below chapter 1...but it's there! There's probably some typos, it's only a first draft, but I did a once over to make sure there's no glaring errors. Enjoy!

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