I’d love to trade feedback, Mark. Count me in!

I’ve been working my way through submitting some reviews, and comments, for most of the authors in this thread :)

Excellent suggestion.  Glad to have an outside eye.

Thanks!  All my daughter’s idea.  It was just a placeholder, but as we went, it really grew on us and just stuck.

@Kim Whale I did that on purpose.  I’ll be posting the second chapter later this week though.