The allure of friendship tantalized his mind. It was shade in a desert.
From here the use of pronoun becomes confusing. At first I thought this was referring to Shun.
He kept the same sullen low look and did what he was told
maybe just me given my job but this reminds of statistics
I think the appropriate word here should be contentment rather than content.
Ungier, the Daughters called them. The unclean. The barbarian. The poisoned. Ungier meant all these things, and perhaps many more.
Ungier, the Daughters called them. The unclean. The barbarian. The poisoned. Ungier meant all these things, and perhaps many more.
