I read the first 2 chapters, I do have a few edits to suggest and will get to them shortly.
Please feel free to go over to my profile and read some of the draft chapters for Zombie Catz- I especially need some advice for my last chapter, Chapter 10. Zombie Catz is a comedy & adventure book, where the 2 main characters are spoiled felines surviving a zombie apocalypse, making it on their own amid starvation & fear & learning to become friends.
I am loving this story! This is a historical figure who has repulsed and fascinated me, just trying to get into the mind of what would lead her to commit such cruelty. I hope we get to explore that as well in the book.
Erzsebet Bathory, one of history’s most brutal and prolific serial killers has tapped into a dark and powerful magic that threatens all who cross her path. All seems lost until Erzsebet’s most loyal attendant discovers she has magic of her own...
Erzsebet Bathory, one of history’s most brutal and prolific serial killers has tapped into a dark and powerful magic that threatens all who cross her path. All seems lost until Erzsebet’s most loyal attendant discovers she has magic of her own...
I love true crime and murder mysteries! Definitely want to know what is going to happen moving forward. Keep writing and I would suggest running your work by a good proof-editor or line editor- there were some repetitive words and spelling errors & too many adverbs.
I also have a work up on Inkshares called ’Zombie Catz’ which is a humor, adventure, middle grade fiction. Would appreciate your thoughts and read-through.
