Stanford couldn’t see who was speaking, he could just see the flicker of annoyance
Do you want to repeat this word? "The date-time stamp on them showed they were taken. . ." or "the date-time stamp showed them to have been taken. . . " Just wondering.
I keep getting hung up on this for some reason. "for which"? maybe? Not sure if anyone else stalls out on this sentence --- I LOVE what you are saying, just the sentence structure seems a little awkward?
maybe, "lifted the glass to his lips""
I like the way you not only say he was afraid, but make us know why THIS fear was truly profound!
Sergeant Jonathan Kevin Stillson, veteran of four tours in the Middle East, two seasons as varsity quarterback at Michigan State University and once-hopeful for the Minnesota Vikings,