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An ominous prologue that promises a fateful battle of good against the rousing forces of darkness. With just enough hints towards the wider world to intrigue the reader, The Spark Internal is off to a good start.
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    Cyael strode down the dark corridor, his boot footfalls breaking the still silence. Magical torches sparking to life as he passed, their dim blue light shimmering across his armor. If any were around he would seem to be an apparition haunting the ancient halls. Cyael’s eyes fixed on the door at the end of the hall lost in the thoughts that had lead him here. He had come down this path before over the centuries, but rarely this late and never alone, yet did so tonight with grim determination. S. . .

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      Cyael strode down the dark corridor, his boot footfalls breaking the still silence. Magical torches sparking to life as he passed, their dim blue light shimmering across his armor. If any were around he would seem to be an apparition haunting the ancient halls. Cyael’s eyes fixed on the door at the end of the hall lost in the thoughts that had lead him here. He had come down this path before over the centuries, but rarely this late and never alone, yet did so tonight with grim determination. S. . .

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        After a vision of darkness brings him face to face with an ancient evil, a member of the Qivar takes actions into his own hands. Meanwhile, fate brings a band of broken warriors together where they must find their strength in each other to survive.
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        So many of those arrows, dozens of them every moment, raining like hail into the tents and the fire-pits and the legs and shoulders of men who fell to the ground screaming, and others who limped along with two or three of the wood shafts sticking out from them, howling about “Gods shit on Persia” and “I’ll skin your children” and other things that made no sense that came out of angry men in agony.
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        Thomas crafts prose that transport the reader through time and tosses them into the world of antiquity. His descriptions are as rich and as decadent as the times in which he guides us through. Whether Thomas is describing the bedroom of a dying King, the gluttony of poppy abusing noble woman, or the cursing of bloody warriors you can't help but be mystified by the attention to detail. The Cradle and the Sword feels like living history, and Thomas has made the white page a window into the soul of the human soul. This is by far one of the best projects I have seen on Inkshares! 
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          Thomas crafts prose that transport the reader through time and tosses them into the world of antiquity. His descriptions are as rich and as decadent as the times in which he guides us through. Whether Thomas is describing the bedroom of a dying King, the gluttony of poppy abusing noble woman, or the cursing of bloody warriors you can't help but be mystified by the attention to detail. The Cradle and the Sword feels like living history, and Thomas has made the white page a window into the soul of the human soul. This is by far one of the best projects I have seen on Inkshares! 
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            I just want to say that I love the way your writing matches the pace of the scene. The imagery is great and I had no trouble stepping into the story. Looking forward to reading more. 
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              I just want to say that I love the way your writing matches the pace of the scene. The imagery is great and I had no trouble stepping into the story. Looking forward to reading more. 
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                Holy wow!  A spin on creation myth mixed into an intricate and well thought out world full of myth, magic, and legend.  Anyone who is a fan of excellent writing and world building should give this a read.
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