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Paul Robinson commented on LandFall
So this idea has been flickering away over the last few weeks, and I just wanted to get it out onto something before I forgot it. It's only a very small nucleus of an idea and is very likely a long way from ever becoming anything, but here it is nonetheless.

Since I had some issues fitting it into 20 words, I now present:

LandFall - The Director's Cut

For centuries the realms of men have sent their bravest warriors and explorers out into the Unending Sea in search of other lands or people. 

For centuries not one ship has ever returned.

On the night which the latest voyage is to set sail from the great port city of Seta, a flickering light appears on the horizon. 

As it draws closer, it is clearly a ship, but there's a problem.

It's not one of theirs.

And it's not alone.

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    Paul Robinson commented on Ghosts of War

    So we've reached the end of the road for the Inkshares campaign, but we're far from the end of the road for this book.

    In the end I sold 181 copies of my book, which in truth, is far and away more than I thought I would actually get. No, it wasn't enough to win the competition, and it was quite a ways from meeting the 1,000 copy target, but that's okay.

    So how's the book going?

    Progress on the book slowed a lot over the course of the competition, the effort of promoting it and 'sale watching' was a drain on time available and motivation. Since the competition ended I've taken some time away from the book, just to think about it, and mostly to just do anything else but write. It's been a nice little break (and I've also been playing far too much of The Witcher 3...).

    I've also been thinking about how best to end the book, and the original ending has changed in ways both slight and significant. Slight in that a character has been inserted into the climax, and significant in that their inclusion has mostly pushed the plot for the sequel to the 3rd book. In fact I was having trouble forming a story for the third book all along (it was getting quite concerning) and this simple insertion of a character solved a whole tonne of issues. So it's a good thing.

    So, what now?

    Well for the next little while I'll be getting a rough structure planned out for books 2 and 3 and making sure the end of this book sets ups the sequels properly enough. Then I'll actually get around to finishing this damn thing. Early July is the estimate.

    Yeah, but then what?

    For the rest of July I'll be doing outlines for the second and third books, as detailed as I can manage in order to be ready to start writing them towards the back end of the year. In August I will be doing a full edit of Ghosts and will start prepping it for publishing.

    Publishing? But the campaign didn't...

    I've decided that I'll be self publishing Ghosts of War, as it's the most practical and cost effective avenue for me to get the book out there as soon as possible. At this point I'm looking at having it out before the end of the year. If all goes well I will probably come back to Inkshares in an effort to fund the sequel.

    I have made a record of everyone who preordered Ghosts and when the time comes that it's available I will contact you all and let you know what's happening. 

    I don't know how long this project page will stay on Inkshares for, but I'll periodically pop in and update on how things are progressing as long as it's here.

    Lastly, I want to thank you all for believing it me and this book enough to support it, it all means a great deal. Even if it didn't get there in the end it was still nice to know you were willing to help out. It's all very much appreciated.

    Thanks again.

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      Paul Robinson commented on Ghosts of War

      Hey guys, update time.

      It's now the last day of the Sword & Laser contest and I'm sitting in 11th place with 123 copies sold. My books been in the top 10 for 6 weeks and I'd hate for it to drop out and not be there at the end. 

      So I have a plan for that, and I'm hoping you can all help me out, it won't take long, nor does it actually involve any money at all.

      Here's the steps:
      1. After you bought your copy (or copies), Inkshares should have gifted you with $10 in credits. 
      2. Sign in to Inkshares to see if you have the credits, it should be up in the top right hand corner.
      3. Order another copy using said credits. Ordering with credits is a really quick and easy process and is super free.

      If everyone goes back and does this I should be able to solidify my position in the top 10 of the competition rather nicely. Of course you can also feel free to harass all your coworkers tomorrow as well...every bit helps.

      The competition ends at midnight on Sunday the 31st of May PST (which for my Australian peoples is 5pm on Monday the 1st of June)

      Thanks for all your help guys, lets get her done.


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        Update for Tuesday the 26th of May:

        We're into the final push towards the 31st of May and the end of the Sword & Laser contest. We've finally gone over the 100 sale mark but Ghosts of War is still currently just over 200 copies out of 5th place, so it's quite a climb, but I'm not losing hope that we can still push this over the line.

        As a booster to the end of this competition I've compiled an 8 chapter preview of the book, you can view/download it at the link below. It's around 100 pages and should give a good insight into the story, the characters and their relationships and hopefully will leave you wanting to read the rest.

        http://bit.ly/1HtTtAf

        Getting 200+ orders in the next few days isn't going to be easy, so as always I'd love it if you could help me out by sharing the link to the sample (it contains links to order the book) and using whatever methods of coercion you have at your disposal to convince your friends/family/coworkers/underlings/minions to grab a copy. Every little bit helps.

        On the writing front, there have been a few changes to the end of the story. There were some key characters who were just sitting around (literally, they were in a room doing nothing) while all the climactic stuff was going on and based on everything I'd written up to that point, I realised there was no way in hell those characters would just sit idly by. So I've been planning out and reorganising the ending a bit to incorporate them a bit better.

        It's actually been a good thing to happen as bits of my prior ending didn't make much sense and the premise they set up for the sequel wasn't going to work. So now this ending works better and it's allowed me to further develop my ideas for the sequels which I've been doing a bit of as well. 

        Good times.


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